- August 8, 2019
- Hosted Games
Keeper of the Sun and Moon
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About
"Keeper of the Sun and Moon" is a 310,000 word interactive fantasy novel where you navigate your first year at a college for supernatural beings, all while trying to prevent a war between angels and demons in the midst of a celestial artifact heist. As a male, female, or non-binary protagonist, you can pursue romances with ten love interests and experience life as one of seven unique species. Your choices control the story in this text-based game, unleashing the power of your imagination.


- The game features a highly engaging and impactful choice-driven story with significant variations based on player decisions, enhancing replayability.
- The characters are well-developed and complex, with meaningful relationships that contribute to a rich narrative experience.
- The world-building is immersive, with a unique magical setting that allows for diverse character backgrounds and choices, making each playthrough feel fresh.
- Some writing and scene transitions feel disjointed or abrupt, which can disrupt immersion and clarity in the story.
- The game can feel railroaded at times, with certain choices leading to predictable outcomes that may diminish the sense of agency.
- There are minor issues with polish, including typos and inconsistencies in the narrative structure, which could benefit from further editing.
story
45 mentions Positive Neutral NegativeThe story is a choice-driven narrative that offers significant depth, engaging characters, and a well-crafted world, though some writing elements may feel imperfect. Players appreciate the variety of choices that impact the story, despite some feeling that certain plot points are predictable or that the antagonist lacks clear motives. While the game has a strong foundation and replay value, it suffers from a somewhat railroaded structure and an abrupt ending that may leave some players wanting more.
“While the main plot stays the same, even two playthroughs is enough to show you even the tiniest detail the author thought of.”
“Engaging story, lots of interesting twists and characters.”
“Keeper of the Sun and Moon has an amazing story and well-thought-out characters that have never once annoyed me the way a badly written one can.”
“Some of the story beats felt too obvious, and the antagonist doesn't seem to have any sort of clear motives, nor a grand plan besides 'destroy the city because bad guy'.”
“Where this story begins to fall apart is the ending.”
“A lot of the choices are just pointless where you will lose no matter what you do, and the whole story is just so railroaded that again your choices feel meaningless.”