- June 26, 2013
- Major Bueno
A Second Chance
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About
"A Second Chance" is a single-player Simulation game that offers a sensational and wholesome story with a dash of humor. As a NASA Ground Control operator, you hold the power to save the world by controlling an array of buttons and systems. Experience the thrill and responsibility of managing space missions and preventing global catastrophes in this exciting game.
- The series is filled with humor, vivid scenes, and great character development, making it a captivating read.
- The historical descriptions are well-researched and engaging, bringing events like the fall of Troy to life.
- The emotional depth and unexpected twists keep readers invested in the characters and their journeys.
- The plot can feel disjointed at times, with abrupt shifts in tone and pacing that may confuse readers.
- Some readers found the time travel logic inconsistent, leading to plot holes that detracted from the overall experience.
- Character development suffers in places, leaving some readers feeling disconnected from the protagonists' motivations.
story
68 mentions Positive Neutral NegativeThe story has received mixed reviews, with many praising the author's descriptive writing and engaging characters, while others criticize the plot for its erratic tone and lack of coherent character development. Reviewers noted significant issues with genre shifts and time travel logic, leading to a disjointed narrative that detracted from emotional investment in the characters. Despite these flaws, some readers found enjoyment in the adventurous elements and twists, indicating that the storytelling can still captivate when it aligns with the series' strengths.
“Jodi Taylor takes your idea of how a story should be constructed and turns it upside down, inside out, and leaves you exhausted and emotional at the end of it.”
“The story is fun, heartbreaking, and, as always, very well written.”
“Jodi Taylor is a wonderful storyteller and proves it once again with a plotline that is both unforeseeable and truly interesting.”
“However, in my opinion, the story falls short in other areas.”
“First off, the tone of the story is all over the place. One page it is a comedy, the next it is a romance, the next it is violent horror, the next it is a macho military mission, etc. I understand that sometimes authors juxtapose narrative tones to strengthen the story, but there is no sense of purpose to this jumble of genre changes.”
“On the other hand, the time travel plot is filled with logic holes that are just too annoying to really enjoy the narrative flow.”